Talk:Sylvia/@comment-174.87.58.248-20200401000551

alright cause it rage material I would like to help with the grammar, and probably a biology lesson.

when you are dealing with true hermaphradites it is common practice to refer to them based on the primary gender of display, that is in this case the mental state and personality projected it is important in gender identifictation for grammer.

he, she, or it. in this case of sylvia, the primary personality is feminine so "she" should be used. if primarly masuline "he" would have been used and if refraining "it" should be used, not they. as such the gender should be hermaphrdite (feminen) and "she" should be used because sylvia primarly displays feminine qualities, so much so the characters recognise this in their statements via interaction.

however this is only the case for hermpahradites, even asexual capable hepahrdites. humans however are physioligically only able to be false-"true-hermphradites" in that only one genetiala works despite having features.

"Sylvia and their forces were no match for the Crimson Demons" if going for gender nutrality it should be: " Sylvia and its forces were no match for the Crimson Demons..." or  "Sylvia and Sylvia's forces were no match for the Crimson Demons..."

"thier" could easily be confused for the crimson demons or any other collective mentioned as "their" is a collective possesive pronoun. meaning that to correctly read the original in proper grammer would be "sylvia and the forces of the crimson demons were no match for the crimson demons..."